nectared treasures
acrostics - love in 50 words
Can there be
only one
memorable
moment
in
time that
makes an
everlasting
nectared treasure of
tenderness?
💕 💕 💕 💕
Come
onto the rollercoaster of my
memory, the undulating
motocross traveling winding paths
inside my brain and within my heart
there, you’ll see images -
magical and
endearing visuals of us,
nurtured
together
💕 💕 💕 💕
C-O-M-M-I-T-M-E-N-T - 50 words in acrostic
dedicated to my husband of 38 years.
Copyright © 2/4/2025 by Andrea O. Corwin
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Comments (11)
I didn't even realize it was an acrostic until the end. Beautifully done! Seamless!
Absolutely gorgeous… brilliant imagery: “Come onto the rollercoaster of my memory, the undulating motocross traveling winding paths inside my brain and within my heart “💝
Love the double acrostic form, Andrea! A very unique and wonderful take on the challenge!
magical and endearing visuals of us, absolutely beautiful. Nicely Done!!! I was wondering if you could tell me how I could leave the emoji's like the heart. I can't figure out how to do it. This was a stunning poem and a great tribute to someone you have been with for 38 years.
The acrostic and the imagery really touched my heart. Congratulations on 38 years of love and commitment! 💕
Stunning. Perfect.
Beautiful work!
Stunning piece, Andrea! Love the story! 💘🌟
Charming piece Andrea! 😊
Just beautiful - Well Done!!1
lovely, Andrea!