It was on this day that my mom died.
It was painful and yes I cried.
Yeah her death turned my life’s tide.
But she’s in a better
place, that’s my belief.
Turning over
a new leaf.
No more
grief.
~~Dedicated to my mother Ruby Lee Spencer (July 3, 1971 - July 26, 2010).
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Joe Patterson
Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.
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Note from the Author: I want to let you know that this is an unusual story, and it has been written purely from whatever is in my unconscious mind, because before I start writing, I get into a flow state that reaches my unconsciousness. I also write in my subconscious mind, which is like a mid-flow state between the conscious and unconscious mind.
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A moving tribute
Moving work Joe! 👏👏😊
Your mom was beautiful! Thank you for celebrating her birthday with us. Moms are special
I love how you can hold all things at once now. Sadness, loss, a sense of peace and s readiness to live.
Oh! Dear really sorry for that.
Ugh!!! Sorry for your loss, my friend. It's also my belief she is in a better place. 🙏🏽
I'm so sorry for your loss.
My condolences, for your loss! This is a beautiful way to keep her memory alive!
Rip , shell be very proud of you
Your mom was so beautiful and young. I can't phathom how painful this must have been for you. You have done a beautiful job keeping her memory alive.