No Net
For The Vocal Breakup Nonet Challenge
Introduction
I am trying not to write any more of these but I had to use this title, didn't I?
The music is "Falling" by Julee Cruise from "Twin Peaks"
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You Cast Me Adrift You Cut Me Loose
Said It Wasn't Me, It Was You
You Stopped Me Dead, Cooked My Goose
So Was Owt You Said True
Now I Am Falling
From Your Mauling
With No Net,
No Net,
Yet
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Blade ๐ช๐ก๏ธโ ๏ธ๐คโ ๏ธ๐ก๏ธ๐ช You Hold The Bloody Blade In Your Hand Hourglass Leaks A Stream Of Red Sand Flows With Fading Love And Life End For Your Hate And Strife My Murder, Your Goal Slaughtered My Soul Now We Part My Heart Stabbed ๐ช๐ก๏ธโ ๏ธ๐คโ ๏ธ๐ก๏ธ๐ช
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Comments (13)
This is beautiful and so, so clever!!
Very clever!
Glad you did one more! Very clever and well wrought!
Oooo, this was so deep and clever! Loved it!
So clever Mike!
Falling to twin peaks music would not be a bad way to go! ๐๐ Nice analogy Mike.
Good job๐น
Great job. Well done.
That's beautiful picture and the poem was awesomeness...
Perfect performance poem!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
I agree. That title beckoned and you answered brilliantly.
This is clever! I feel like I can't stop writing nonets right now. They're just so fun (even if this prompt is kind of a sad one).
Good wordplay.