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November Rain Challenge (unofficial)

A 6W6L Poem format

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 2 years ago β€’ Updated 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read

Miracles twirl, softly, from the trees

Mingling with the rain, on me

Mama calls, look at the leaves

Mottling out a path of green

Maps of a moist, multicolored dreams

Mysteries made for mama and me

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Mackenzie Davis2 years ago

    I love this. Gorgeous rhythm, beautiful imagery. That word, mottling, is brilliantly used here.

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Very nicely done.

  • Mark Graham2 years ago

    Quite the memory this poem makes me think.

  • I love how all your lines started with an M! Beautiful poem!

  • Magical.

  • This is a very good oneπŸ‘ πŸ§‘πŸŒŸπŸ˜‰πŸ“

  • Mother Combs2 years ago

    So very sweet and heart-touching

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    A wonderful, warm moment. Well done!

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