maybe I’ll catch your
smoke 🔥
In the pale blue fire,
You cook wild❤️
dear
My work:
Patheos,
The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,
The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books
Silent Bites by Eukalypto
How does it work?
Loved the structure here, and the phrasing is *mwah* Loved the video too!
Very Cool! Made me Giggle 😃
Supercute!!
Wow... the video is great!!😂
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Beautiful!
I don't understand!
I really love the term "pale blue fire". That is so beautiful! Also, the way you structured this haiku is very unique - Love it!
Fantastic!!!🥰
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Comments (8)
Loved the structure here, and the phrasing is *mwah* Loved the video too!
Very Cool! Made me Giggle 😃
Supercute!!
Wow... the video is great!!😂
This comment has been deleted
Beautiful!
I don't understand!
I really love the term "pale blue fire". That is so beautiful! Also, the way you structured this haiku is very unique - Love it!
Fantastic!!!🥰