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I THOUGHT..

By Victor MendezPublished 5 years ago 1 min read
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i read a line that said

give an offering for the dead..but

i had naught but a little bread.

i heard a line, she said

if not for me then you'd be dead

so i gave to her a bite of bread.

i saw a line ahead

i wondered if i should leave instead..but

i waited to get some help for my empty head.

i read a line that said

write a poem for some cred..but

came back to me crossed out with red.

i heard a line or so i thought

turned out was not something that could be bought..

and so i thought..

and so i said..

let me take my little pieces

give to one that loves me yet..and so

i offered up..

unto the dead.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Victor Mendez

Born in 1958.There's a lot of road beneath these feet.Worn out pairs upon pairs of shoes.Been a ranch kid,a city kid,a Marine,a dad, a grandfather now,an avid reader and just recently began writing poetry in 2015 just to vent.

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