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Breakup Nonet

By Andrea Corwin Published 2 years ago 1 min read
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Disjointed doctor virtual-call

- didn't dent the list of questions -

unprepared, unsuccessful

"must move to next patient,

will order blood tests"

I will manage,

stay healthy,

without

you

*** A break-up nonet about allopathic medicine providers.

+++ Ever want to break up with your doctor? It seems they are too busy and too overworked, and it's easier to plug numbers into an online calculator, prescribe medications, and not give individualized care. Allopathic care at its finest….but I prefer naturopathic, let's keep them healthy care.

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Andrea Corwin

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  • The Dani Writer2 years ago

    Great focus for a nonet! Cuz some doctors are crap. They deserve to be left with no explanation. The good ones are the salt of the earth. Best of luck with the challenge!

  • Oooo, this was a very different and creative approach on the challenge! I loved it!

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    Unique take and clever lines! Well done, Andrea!

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Always scrapes the surface only, doesnt it.

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    If I can find a natural remedy, then that's always my first choice. Seeing a doctor nowadays is like winning a prize - I'm always a bit surprised.

  • Kodah2 years ago

    Patients sometimes feel like they aren't heard during medical appointments! Very well done, Andrea! 💌

  • Yes, important not to be too dependent on another half in a relationship for the obvious! Good one.

  • Joe Patterson2 years ago

    I need a doctor to break up with.

  • Mark Graham2 years ago

    Telehealth has its purpose, but I agree with you that medicine should be face to face for care. Good work.

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