steam swirls / sight softens
splash - scald - slowly sit / submerge
soak / soothe. sweet solace
About the Creator
ali
a tangled mess of thoughts. occasionally a clear one bursts through. how about writing things in a public forum? seems wise.
she / her
unceded Wurundjeri & Boon Wurrung Lands
substack: aliwriteswords
insta / upscrolled: @aliwriteswords
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💖Those sibilants really gave a beautiful assuagement to the respite in your title. You hold the secret power of the haiku; your brevity in the single and double syllables is striking. I love how you softened the sight with the swirl of the steam.