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Driving; night of fog...
Something in rearview mirror.
Shadow in back seat...
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Kendall Defoe
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Comments (9)
Great job!
Scary!!!!!!
*screams in panic*
Lovely imagry
Ooo, what could that be? Excellent take, though I am trying to avoid doing a second piece for this challenge
Ah this is very clever! Well done mate!
Ooooooh. The thought of someone in the backseat.
Your use of sparse imagery and pacing captures the essence of psychological horror perfectly. The simplicity of the scene makes the tension all the more haunting.
You’ve captured so much tension in just a few words. Awesome work!