Santa Maria
An Ode to Her (SMD if it were glittery and nice)
She who whispers into the wind,
a new song dripped in gold
laying in a
field of roses,
delights in the splendor of new flavor.
She giggles with innocent abandon
and blushes under the heat of the sun.
She is the safety blanket for which I beseech
in the midst of ghosts haunting my night.
She's the light who flutters like butterflies
to kiss the dangers of the day away
off the for of your head.
There's no love like hers.
There's no hug like hers.
There's no letter, or note,
that makes me smile like hers.
And so tonight, a letter in awe of her,
I write.
No words could ever truly paint such angelic sight.
No rhyme could give all the things I love about her reason.
Yet still, with such a lack of words to devote to her,
my love for her will not weaken.
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Jennifer David
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Congratulation on the TS
Your angelic words do truly paint a lovely picture of a poem. Congratulations on Top Story.
Beautifully written. Congratulations on your top story.
I remember reading the roast, I think. This is just sweet. Lovely imagery, like a bright summer day.
This is so wonderfully sweet! An elegant and brilliant tribute to an undoubtedly lovely soul. :) Congrats on the Top Story, Jennifer!
Congratulations on your TS.
I really enjoyed reading this. Your insights are valuable.
Absolutely gorgeous!
Jen, this is a beautiful heartfelt tribute to your sister. She sounds like a real gem (like her sister)!
Amazing piece