Shower Song
a haiku
Artist unknown
After shoveling
the shower whistling, its song
fogging the mirror.
About the Creator
Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insight
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Off the Book
It ended like every other stupid idea. Badly, and alone. I’m researching digital confession ethics, he said. A tech ethicist. He gestured at floating data I couldn’t see then pulled out a physical notebook. Actual paper, fountain pen. He held it up like he was showing me scripture.
By Nicky Frankly3 days ago in Fiction
Comments (12)
Congratulations! Love the last line.
A shower song, Yes, I love this, Ava! Congratulations on your win❣🥰
This was a magnificent way to turn a mundane act into poetry. Congrats on your placement on the challenge!🎉
Back to say nice to see your name alongside mine and so many others! Congrats, this was one of my fave of the challenge.
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Back to say congrats on this brilliant piece placing!
I know shoveling all too well - congrats Ava
no idea what shoveling snow is like. We don't often get enough to fill one shovel. Congratulations on your place, and on dealing with real winter.
And in just a few syllables, this scene comes vividly alive. Brilliant work, Ava. :)
The hot shower after fighting with snow is a delicious luxury. You've distilled that beautifully here!
Nice ❤️🔥
Oooh. Steamy lol. This is great Ava and good to see you! Hope you're well!