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Your hug smells warm
Your laugh is nice to watch across your face
Your humor tastes good on my mirthful tongue
My beating heart loud around you
Thankful your love is soft on my skin
About the Creator
Ariana GonBon
29yo bi Xicana. There's always more to write about, in more interesting ways than white men.
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Ooooo I love this! Very clever, mixing up the senses and how they are noticed!