The midnight hush enfolds
me in my loverโs arms
tempers our moods
until body heat
turns daylight steel girders to
smokey platinum and
shimmering gold
A liquid fire slithers
into a sultry slur of
sensory syncopation
gliding, spiraling until
finally resting beside
my beloved
intertwined, nested
upon our marriage bed
Copyright ยฉ 1/27/2025 by Andrea O. Corwin
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Comments (13)
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Fantastic!
This felt very unique in the approach you took, love the metal imagery among more traditional love poetry elments! it felt alive! very well done, Andii!
Such a beautiful entry! I loved all the imagery of metal, very cool.
Wow. Loved the ending to this loving and endearing poem.
Good Lord, Andi! Talk about fanning flames! Great challenge entry!
Wow, that gave me such a vivid picture! Great poem, Andi!
Oooo, that was so intimate and steamy! Loved your poem!
Fantastic poem! Great work
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Oh, that's hot! Well done.
This is quite the steamy love poem. Good job.