Stuck on Romeo 2
Living in a milestone high on a vigorous lift!
He blessed my eyes
With his pride…
I watched as he played with His absorbing gaze.
Sent my heart,
Scurrying Towards
Found Treasures...
Slow stroking
My Dignity...
He found me,
Where I had Lost me...
He saw me,
When I had inaugurated
Myself to Darkness...
He called out to me through the light
In my empathy...
Now the only shadow I see is me.
Stroking my Dignity,
But never say my name...
That day cometh,
When heavy precipitation
Falls down
Nonetheless
You remain silent
And through your eyes
I can see the pang...
In my sense
To feel your lips,
Bordering mine
Was the reflection
Of one moment
Back in Time...
I wonder if true Love could yet exist actually inside a Lover from the past...
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Comments (14)
This is a captivating series, of love and loss. You have a way with words, Lonzo!
Beautiful! Love this series!
Impressive!!!💖💖💕
Some wonderful words here, kept seeing this and losing it, found it now
incredible!
That last question is a riddle wrapped within a riddle. Who can ever know. You are a dreamer my friend. Dream on
Incredibly evocative. Just one very naive question. Is "stroking my dignity" a euphemism?
At this point in my life, I wonder if even true love exists, lol! But if you asked me many years ago, I would have said yes, true love does exist inside a lover from the past. Well, maybe it's my answer now too 🥺💔
daaaamn! you got mad talent--makes me green with envy. a very strong opening and it continues to keep me hooked. I love these short and succinct verses you are able to create
oh, this is a beautiful piece. Well done.
Ooh - this is like a whole story now! 💖
All time will tell 🥰
Very romantic! Nice one Lonzo! 💓💗💖
Excellent.