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Summer days of healing.

The 500 Reads Haiku Challenge by Carolina Borges.

By Novel AllenPublished 8 months ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read
Calming waters

Balm for summer days

Babbling brook...Cool waters

Toes dipped...Heavenly!

I recently went on an uphill walk on a trail which led to a gorgeous cascading waterfall. I was sweating from the get-go, the sun came our after a bit of rain and all the younger folks were far ahead, impatiently (in a fun way) egging me on. Imagine my joy and happiness to see a babbling brook of cool water galloping along the many stones without a care in the world.

Still, I had to keep up with the younger uns and wait until we got to the top of this uphill mother of an uphill climb before I could dip my toes into the cool welcoming stream.

What a wonderful day it was, the waterfall and the stream...pure delight.

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The prompt to cheer Carolina on to the next milestone. Kudos to her.

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Novel Allen

You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.

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  • Carolina Borges7 months ago

    This one felt like a deep exhale. The mix of warmth, water, and healing was so vivid—and your author’s note made it all the more moving. I’m reading through all the entries now, and this one brought me real peace. Thank you for sharing such a joyful moment.

  • Beautifully vivid portrayal of your refreshing experience… I know the feeling!🙃

  • Mother Combs8 months ago

    Oh, so wonderful, Novel <3

  • Tiffany Gordon8 months ago

    What a lovely haiku! That sounds so refreshing right about now!

  • Lana V Lynx8 months ago

    So beautiful and vivid, Novel, it's like I dipped my toes there.

  • Sid Aaron Hirji8 months ago

    tranquil and serene

  • Jay Kantor8 months ago

    -N- I've so enjoyed you from the GiT-Go..! -J-

  • These are wonderful thoughts beautifully shared

  • Grz Colm8 months ago

    Ah, sounds heavenly indeed, Novel! Beautiful. Glad you enjoyed. ☺️

  • Nice and peaceful flow! Beautiful, Novel.

  • That sure sounds like a wonderful adventure and experience. Loved your poem!

  • Antoni De'Leon8 months ago

    Enjoyable day indeed. Blessings to the healing powers of water.

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