Summer Night
With him...
Blushing ๐
Like a warm breeze,
You Brushed up Against my Heart โฅ๏ธ
I gave birth to Butterflies ๐ฆ from the Thought of you!!
The Smell of Barbecue ๐
And the Taste of the Sun...
Just Reminiscing of sum Summertime Fun!
Transforming Time to a Snail ๐ the Moment I Met You...
Like a Slumber Party and Pjโs
We came Together.
Like Ice-cream ๐ฆ and a Cone, I Melted into you!
The way I Felt stood out
Like a Cool Night with a Misty Moon ๐
Iโll never forget that June;
Like Fireflies luminating โlightโ
Flying high by Yourside
Lost in the Night โฆ
๐ Starlight and โจ stars are Bright
You only live one life.
Thatโs what my conscious
Kept telling me as I Lay Dutifully on the
Rooftop with him,
That Summernight.
About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
โ Public Diary, of an Urban LGBTQ Poet
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Comments (14)
Love this!
Just beautiful! Absolutely wonderful! ๐
favorite!
Lovely!!! Love this!!!
Beautiful story and setting! Thank you for sharing! ๐
Ohhh you set a beautiful picture and tone here.
Wonderful, Lonzo ๐๐
Beautifully written! ๐คฉ I can feel the warmth and magic of that summer night through your words. ๐ It's amazing how a moment with someone special can create such unforgettable memories. Thank you for sharing your experience with us. โค๏ธ
Beautiful poem. Well done.
Awww, this was so sweet!
Heart pulsing memory. Great capture in moving poetic form. ๐ฅฐ
Wistful, dreamy, a memory to carry & sustain you. I take it the relationship did not last, at least in the temporal sense. But the memory carries with it the hope & possibility of another, perhaps even more than the first, that one day will be yours. Blessings, & may your yearnings find a resting place in someone worthy of your love.
Moment captured - something for all the senses. Fabulous :)
Great timing my friend! We just had a super-late in the season dump of snow. It's pretty in the sunlight, but very unwelcome. Your romantic trip to summertime was practically a lifesaver!