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Sweet and Sour

A Pair of Keets in Love

By ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)Published 12 months ago 1 min read
Sweet and Sour
Photo by Jonah Pettrich on Unsplash

You so sweet

You so sour

Your delightful beak I'll devour

WAIT! Is that your tongue? Did you just eat sunflower seeds?

You know I'm allergic! Where's my Epi-pen?

Sweetie? My asthma!

I gotcha my rosy cheeked darlin'! Inhale! And again!

Damn. I love you.

Birds of a feather

Shucks...

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About the Creator

ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)

~ American feminist living in Sweden ~ SHE/HER

Admin. Vocal Social Society

Find me: ‪@andreapolla63.bsky.social‬

FB: https://www.facebook.com/susanandreasimmonspolla

ST: https://rock63.substack.com/

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  • Caroline Jane12 months ago

    🤣🤣🤣 true love in flight! 🥰

  • Hahahahahah the Epipen to the rescue! Loved this!

  • Bren12 months ago

    neat, tight and cute! +Parrots! https://youtu.be/DZElbix-nf4?si=Hcw68Zqb2Dfe4nAM

  • Don't always flock together. Sometimes they just nestle.

  • Komal12 months ago

    This is the most chaotic, life-threatening, and love-filled poem I've ever read—absolute gold! From romance to near-death to "birds of a feather" in record time. If love isn't a rollercoaster like this, I don’t want it!

  • Mother Combs12 months ago

    That's so stinkin cute and sweet, love this

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