TAKE ME SOMEWHERE FOR A FEW DAYS....
Maldives would be fine by me
Take me somewhere for a few days
days where we try new ways
ways of life that we never persuade
persuade only the things we like
like an adventure on a bike ride
ride below and the heights
heights that we were afraid to climb
climb the uncertain peaks of life
life that was build for dancing slow
slow does our time passes by
by the time we all wake up in a lie
lie that we all gonna be fine
fine knowing it was our take
take me somewhere for a few days
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WRITER'S NOTE: Heyaa everyone! I tried a new style of poetry as I previously read a beautiful piece of work by Jazzy Gonçalves called ''Take your place in time''. Although it was hard to write (no idea how she did it effortlessly) yet I have still tried it, do share your views in the comment section and let me know if I could improve in any way. I have linked her work please give it a read. TAKE CARE!
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Missclicked
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Comments (10)
I would love to try it! A new format I haven't tried. I have a writers group and I'm looking for new formats for February. It may make a good contest poem. I have 4 contests in February 😊💕💗
great work
Awesome!!! Love it!!!♥️♥️💕
Very very cleverly written!
Here is your episode https://todaysurvey.today/01/episode-3-poems-on-human-experiences%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
This was great - looking forward to your next attempts. These were some of my best lines: "heights that we were afraid to climb climb the uncertain peaks of life"
Your first attempt? You're kidding me this was so great! Can I read this on the podcast???
This was your first attempt? The poem is beautiful! You carry so much emotion in so few words Brilliantly done :)
Omggg you made this format look so easy! You nailed this! Loved this beautiful poem!
i like it alot- Super cool :) It really highlights the headword. Very well done 🥰