There is a point where the excavation fails.
Where the ground is too hard
and the artifacts become elusive.
Where we spend too long
sifting through the backdirt,
searching for a diagnostic sherd we missed
some patterned rim or check-stamped proof
that there was once a heart
beating beneath the clay.
I sat at the edge of the pit,
waiting for a sign,
a scrap of data to prove
I wasn't just digging my own grave
in the name of a history
already forgotten
About the Creator
Archery Owl
Father and Friend
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