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The Brake-Cord's Song

A Vision of the Precipice

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
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Just as the world tilts forward, I see

The ancient path grow steep before me,

Where shadows of what was recede

And light burns bright on what must be.

O Soul! Thou standest at the gate

Where innocence and knowing meet:

The golden chain of yesterday

Snaps clean beneath thy naked feet.

Behold! The deer in the road

Has turned to face thy trembling heart,

Its eyes like furnaces of God

That tear the old world apart.

No more the lamb's sweet pasture song,

No more the shepherd's gentle crook

The mountain calls with voices strong

From hollers I dare not look.

Here is the knife-edge of all choice,

The precipice of mortal flame,

Where angels and demons speak with one voice:

"Nothing shall be the same."

I feel the earth shift beneath,

The brake-cord singing under my foot

One breath between the sheath

And the blade's bright command.

The road tilts forward. I release

My grip on what I thought was real.

The world spins into fierce peace.

I am the spoke. I am the wheel.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Beautiful and Brutal Things, his latest book.

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  • Aspen Marie 6 months ago

    Fantastic. My new favourite of yours!

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