The Hushing
Read "The Hushing," a sensory poem that captures the sounds and smells of autumn's final moments, the silence, and the first "click" of winter's frost.

The last gold leaf lets go, a spinning sigh,
It clicks on brittle grass, no longer pliant.
The air, once sweet with cider, smoke, and rot,
Now smells of iron, distant, sharp, defiant.
A final, weary rustle shakes the bough
Where stubborn russet clings, a memory,
The wind’s thin whisper shifts its language now,
From mournful song to chilling prophecy.
Then, silence.
A waiting, heavy pause,
That stretches taut across the sleeping land.
The world holds its breath, obeys new laws,
Gripped in a sudden, crystallizing hand.
The cold descends, not as a gentle guest,
But as a presence, absolute and stark,
A weightless pressure on the planet’s chest,
A gathering of purpose in the dark.
And then, the sound.
Not loud, but infinitely small,
A billion tiny fractures, whispers, clicks,
As rime adheres and hoar-frost starts to crawl.
A crackle, as the frozen puddle ticks.
The *sound* is silver, delicate and keen,
A crystalline percussion, faint and clear,
The brittle whisper of a world unseen,
The very breath of winter, drawing near.
The dawn reveals the work the night has done:
A pale, flat light on meadows washed in white.
Each naked branch, a diamond in the sun,
Each blade of grass, a shard of frozen light.
The world is hushed, and sharpened, and defined,
The muddy, blurred-edge softness, gone.
A new-old stillness settles on the mind,
With the first, stinging breath of winter’s dawn.
About the Creator
Smyrna
Smyrna is an artist, storyteller, and dreamer who brings imagination to life through vibrant creations and captivating narratives. Blending visual art with rich tales, Smyrna invites audiences into worlds where creativity knows no bounds.



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