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The Key

Ironic, Iconic... Sardonic.

By C. Rommial ButlerPublished 9 months ago 2 min read
Edwin Austin Abbey: Key to the Castle

STRANDED!

We all gotta die.

Should we die striving toward the ideal or wallowing in the cesspit of the actual?

I used to call folks out on their lies, but I learned it was best to leave them to tie themselves up in knots.

After all, if we’re both stranded in the web, how am I gonna help ‘em out?

***** * *****

The Key

Individuation is key.

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Becoming

an individual

does not mean

that we separate

our

selves.

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It means

we take

the responsibility

to become

strong enough

to withstand

the collective brand

so we can better it

with a discerning mind

and a guiding hand.

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Individual: NOT DIVIDED IN ONE’S SELF. WHOLE. NOT ALONE. NOT ISOLATED. BUT WHOLE.

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(A gear with broken teeth is no good to the clock.

Each separate part must be whole for the clock to accurately tell the time.

Otherwise, the clock will not work.

Wanna open that locked door, eh?

Need the key, don’tcha?

Individuation is key.)

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“Fuck that,” I hear you say. “I’ll just break it down.”

Go ahead.

Break it down.

Won’t be nothin’ in there but you and the empty ruin you made of your life.

People who work together will go on to build something else while you revel in your power to destroy.

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Okay, then, fine, you think secretly, with that silly smirk on your face. I’ll befriend someone who has the key and get them to let me in.

Sure. But eventually they’ll lock you out again when they realize what a manipulative little shit you are.

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“I’ll steal the key then!” You say out loud before you can cover your traitor mouth with your

Oh

Too

Slow

Hands.

Go right ahead.

Go in.

Lock the others out.

Don’t worry.

They won’t come back.

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They won’t even knock

or say goodbye.

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They’ll be so relieved

to finally move on

to open spaces

and honest ways

while you take the time

to work on your self.

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See how it all comes around?

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You were so focused

on getting through the door,

you forgot about the key!

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It ain’t in no one else’s hand.

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It’s yours to make,

And it is

ironically

iconically

sardonically

UNIVERSAL.

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Individuation is key.

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About the Creator

C. Rommial Butler

C. Rommial Butler is a writer, musician and philosopher from Indianapolis, IN. His works can be found online through multiple streaming services and booksellers.

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  • D.K. Shepard8 months ago

    An interesting commentary on the collective success being dependent upon the efficacy of each part! “Each separate part must be whole for the clock to accurately tell the time.” And well done with the door/key analogy, very well expanded

  • That is very true and it's so deep. Certainly very thought provoking. It's brilliant!

  • Lamar Wiggins9 months ago

    Interesting. I not only learned a new word but understand it's importance in the collective. Another fine performance, my friend. Take a bow...👏👏👏

  • Mark Graham9 months ago

    We are all individuals and must do what we must do to learn right from wrong and to me that is the key and I probably did not read the poem right.

  • Antoni De'Leon9 months ago

    I always need a reread with your psychological thrillers...so much wisdom infused in them/ yep...we tend to outfox ourselves trying to outfox others.

  • Jay Kantor9 months ago

    'Sup Cr - How interesting - As a manipulative little Sh*t - Off to the 'Cesspit' with me...! Jk.bud.in.l.a.

  • JBaz9 months ago

    What a wonderful world this would be if we each follow this simple realistic yet common sense appproach.

  • Rachel Deeming9 months ago

    I do love it when you get to philosophising which is, er, always.

  • And this is the essence of humanity, Charles. I second Tim's comment.

  • There was a synchronistic resonance here with the latest piece from Ellie Hoovs, so I added her poem The Clock, whcih is part of her greater Wonderland Challenge, as a link inside my piece!

  • Tim Carmichael9 months ago

    Painful truths wrapped in powerful words. Great job!

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