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The Letdown

When the spark is greater than the fire

By Tanya LeiPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
The Letdown
Photo by Sierra Koder on Unsplash

Glances from you make me swoon

I didn’t understand at first

I thought I’d be immune

~

I was sweating like a monsoon

I thought my heart would burst

It was blowing up like a balloon

~

Glances from you made me swoon

In you I was immersed

I knew it would be over soon

~

I tried my best to attune

But it turned for the worst

I fell back to stare at the moon

~

The whole thing felt like a cartoon

Was it me who was cursed

Or was it this goon

~

In your arms I came to ruin

Almost like it was rehearsed

Now all I wanted was the moon

And to dance to a new tune

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  • Challenge: Villanelle of Regret

Villanelle

About the Creator

Tanya Lei

A poet, if nothing else.

In a blank space, captivating words flow freely to create something that has not existed before.

From my mind, to yours.

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  • Imola Tóth4 months ago

    It's a great take for the challenge, I love the last line. It's powerful and gives so much hope for starting over, no matter what.

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