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The Locksmith Inside My Mirror

Watching me, waiting for me

By Marie381Uk Published 6 days ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2026

The Locksmith Inside My Mirror

The locksmiths inside my mirror

waiting with his keys

his eyes are hollow

his mouth does not move

yet I hear him

He knows the cracks in my skin

he counts the shadows in my room

each night he stands closer

hand curled around iron teeth

that never rust

I do not ask which lock he keeps

or which door he will open

I only know the sound

of turning metal

echoing where no sound should be

The glass shakes when I breathe

his silence speaks louder than prayer

and I cannot turn away

for he waits

and he is patient

The locksmiths inside my mirror

waiting with his keys

The shadows crawl across the floor

and I feel them reach for me

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham6 days ago

    The words and image are frightened, and I hope you do not mind but could your locksmith be that dreaded Long COVID illness. Great work on this one.

  • L.I.E5 months ago

    This is creepy. Excellent poem.

  • Sandy Gillman5 months ago

    The idea of a locksmith with keys waiting in the mirror gave me goosebumps.

  • That image and your words are scary but excellent

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡5 months ago

    I love this! Especially "iron teeth that never rust." I hope you are feeling good, sweet lady. ⚡💙⚡

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