The Love Boat⚓😍
My First Cruise, felt sensible, like my first Love scene, or did we just make the best love scene-nice to meet you❗
I held my breath in an attempt to escape
The heat...
I didn't desire to watch them,
Confer their across-the-board eyes of curiosity...
We Danced for a rhythm inside
Our defensible universe...
To the beat of my nature, his vibration pumped in the palm of my hand.
The Boat swayed with a casual Flow...
There on the deck,
I dreamed of my life being lived with
The wind.
Mellowed out, Soft, and Warm.
I gazed into the marble-blue water and wet my imagination with splashes of Prominence!
He just held on to me and I followed his ebullition...
I only met you once prematurely by the tavern,
His eyes darted into abundance...
😉All Aboard The Love Boat ⚓ ❤️
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Comments (16)
Once again, great.
Beautiful poem. Love it.
Beautiful :)
Gosh this was so breathtakingly beautiful!
I've never been on a cruise, but I am so ready to board a ship right now and get away! Nice work! 🥰🥰🥰
Take me there 🥰🎉
Fabulous!!!💖💖💕
Wow, I love the lines 'we danced for a rhythm inside' and 'his eyes darted into abundance'.
Life being lived with the wind. Another great poem! ❤️
Great visuals!
You placed me right in the setting... and I've never been on a cruise! Cute puppy!
Love them love boats, eat till you can’t move, nice writing Lonzo 😊
Awww. ❤😆
A wonderful entertaining read, love the ending
Haha! Got me on that one. Just when you think the boat is about to rock, along comes the true star of the show! 🤩 Loved it!
Love it. A pictures worth a thousand words. This one is worth a surprise ending!