The Mirror Knows
Reflections Twist, Shadows Feast—And Something Watches Beneath the Glass.
I told myself it wasn’t real.
The glass, the shape, the crawling feel.
But mirrors lie—they twist, they cheat,
And something waits where shadows meet.
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Tonight, it moves when I do not.
Its head stays still, but bones have rot.
Its lips uncoil, its teeth are thin,
And all its smiles start from within.
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I step away, it follows near.
Its nails tap soft, its eyes grow clear.
No longer glass—no longer fake,
It knows the sounds my tendons make.
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"You made me, dear, you let me hatch,
Each buried thought, each deep-down scratch.
Each time you wished they'd choke and die—
I grinned, I fed, I watched you lie."
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It lunges fast, the glass explodes,
My ribs are split, my marrow folds.
I try to scream, my throat turns black,
As fingers peel and muscles crack.
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It climbs inside, it takes my face,
Its breath is warm—its voice is lace.
It wears my skin, it laughs, it sings,
It steals my name, my thoughts, my things.
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And as it grins, as it deceives,
My shattered eyes watch from the leaves.
A soul now trapped where no one goes,
Behind the glass… where the mirror knows.
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Comments (5)
Oh, my!! So very chilling!! I do love a good scare
Since it is a mirror this is quite a chillingly creepy. Good job.
Such a hauntingly beautiful piece about self created darkness that, if left unchecked, is allowed to twist and take over our reality, leaving us trapped watching the worst version of ourselves. Very thought-provoking.
sounds like a relationship I had once....terrifying
Very well written