Poets logo

The Wind is Surely Asking Something

For The Unnecessary Line Challenge

By Gabriel HuizengaPublished about 10 hours ago Updated about 6 hours ago 1 min read

The wind is surely asking something;

it raps meekly on my old window.

Should ever I deign to answer it,

I fear where it might ask me to go.

*

To follow it upward, heaven-bound?

To trek across hell-scapes, below?

To bear brothers-in-arms back homeward?

- or to leave my own mind-currents' flow?

*

To sing with it tunes upon glaciers?

To weep with it, 'longside a willow?

To dance with it across the deserts?

- to invite you, dear friend, to follow?

*

Mayhaps she seeks only company;

Open port, to alight, as a crow,

and kindness proffered to a stranger

too rare, the hospitable home's glow.

*

She could shatter the glass like nothing.

*

The wind is surely asking something;

it raps gently on my old window.

Should ever I deign to answer it,

I wonder where it might ask me to go.

artnature poetrySong Lyrics

About the Creator

Gabriel Huizenga

Twas for love of words that I first joined this site:

Poetry, especially, and dear short stories too;

For to live one's best is to read, and to write!

So find me in words here, and I'll find you 💙

Thanks for stopping by! :)

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments (4)

Sign in to comment
  • Rachel Deemingabout 2 hours ago

    That line just shatters that wistful peace that you've created, never mind glass! She's an unpredictable thing, the wind. I loved this, Gabriel, as always.

  • Matthew J. Frommabout 5 hours ago

    Once again….one of the most elite poets on the platform

  • John Coxabout 9 hours ago

    Yours are the sort of poems where I might find myself or just as easily get lost and never find my way home again. To ride on the back of the wind is the ultimate adventure. Wonderful entry to the challenge, Gabriel!

  • Harper Lewisabout 10 hours ago

    I love the way this breathes.

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.