The Wind is Surely Asking Something
For The Unnecessary Line Challenge

The wind is surely asking something;
it raps meekly on my old window.
Should ever I deign to answer it,
I fear where it might ask me to go.
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To follow it upward, heaven-bound?
To trek across hell-scapes, below?
To bear brothers-in-arms back homeward?
- or to leave my own mind-currents' flow?
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To sing with it tunes upon glaciers?
To weep with it, 'longside a willow?
To dance with it across the deserts?
- to invite you, dear friend, to follow?
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Mayhaps she seeks only company;
Open port, to alight, as a crow,
and kindness proffered to a stranger
too rare, the hospitable home's glow.
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She could shatter the glass like nothing.
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The wind is surely asking something;
it raps gently on my old window.
Should ever I deign to answer it,
I wonder where it might ask me to go.
About the Creator
Gabriel Huizenga
Twas for love of words that I first joined this site:
Poetry, especially, and dear short stories too;
For to live one's best is to read, and to write!
So find me in words here, and I'll find you 💙
Thanks for stopping by! :)


Comments (4)
That line just shatters that wistful peace that you've created, never mind glass! She's an unpredictable thing, the wind. I loved this, Gabriel, as always.
Once again….one of the most elite poets on the platform
Yours are the sort of poems where I might find myself or just as easily get lost and never find my way home again. To ride on the back of the wind is the ultimate adventure. Wonderful entry to the challenge, Gabriel!
I love the way this breathes.