This Body
An Ode
This body
has crossed oceans of raging waters
has been lost in storms at sea.
Its possibilities are endless;
its power is still surprising me.
.
Is there any blessing so automatic, so unconditional,
as the next breath?
My body continues to fight for me, even when my mind is courting death.
it is a rebel to its bones; it goes on even when I want to give up.
it is the half-broke chariot in which I pull ahead, cross the finish line of dreams, and hold aloft the cup.
.
This ink that marks my flesh is a map of places I've been,
whether on the globe or the tapestry of my mind,
showcasing a lot of what I love and some
of what I’ve had to leave behind.
.
Some will look at my palette and complain in hate,
but it takes personal touches to make a house a home-
why not settle in and decorate?
This flesh is the place I'll one day end,
and the place, each time I wake, I start;
.
if this body is a temple, then its walls deserve some art.
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Comments (9)
This is wonderful. Love the finish! Congrats on the TS.
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Every touch is a work of art.
It speaks with such honesty about struggle, survival, and self-acceptance. I love how the body is portrayed not as something to fix, but as something to honor—flawed, scarred, decorated, and still fighting. Congratulations on your top story!
Every touch is a work of art.
realy you are right i always use this in every meal
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Love the main line, but the half broke chariot is a great image, too. And “settle in and decorate” I’m too wish washy to get my own, but this is a lovely ode to those that can make that decision
Absolutely love it! That last line is such a good comeback to the people who are against tattoos and jewellery. Very nicely done as always, Raistlin. Good luck in the challenge!