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Thrilled

an invitation to the younger "me"

By Anna Published 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read
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Escape from the city...

Come with me, I have something to show you...

Look up to the bright sky!

I like them... do you?

Pick one, quickly! Your favourite!

See? It's like another world,

Enjoy the moment before it's too late!

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Anna

"Put good out into the world and good will come back to you" - Kumiko, Cobra Kai

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  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Positive and inspirational!!! Love it!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•

  • Well said , such positivity

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is lovely. Good luck

  • This is a top story for me

  • John Cox2 years ago

    This poem is filled with youthful wonder! When I was a boy. the stars seemed so much brighter. When did I stop seeing the night sky? Loved it, Anna!

  • Colleen Walters2 years ago

    I love this, Anna! There’s so much to see and feel away from the city ❀️😊 great job, as usual!

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