Treasure
Written on a cool Spring morning
If thou wert a chalice
I would sip from thee with care
Not for fear of loss
From artistry so fair
But rather so as not to waste
A single drop therein contained
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If thou wert a sunrise
I would look on thee with glee
For in the moment of your rising
Every human eye would rest on thee
And the warmth of thine glowing
Into every heart would creep
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If thou wert the ocean
I would sail with spirits high
And explore a world most wonderous
Beneath a pure and perfect sky
To seek out greater knowing
Of your mysteries far beyond the shore
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If thou wert a treasure
I would admire from afar
For fear of greed in steeling
You away from what you are
A priceless gem of endless worth
And a shame to hide away
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If thou wert a poem
I would in awe forever stand
Of the mind that crafted thee
From naught but cosmic sand
A radiant stanza
In the symphony of life
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But thou art not a chalice
Nor yet the break of day
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Thou art not an ocean
To bear me far away
.
Nor yet art thou a treasure
And thou art not a poem
Though to one like me you seem that way
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To describe thee is a challenge
And the path is often fraught
With risk of losing sight of thee
Through the camera that I brought
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A beautiful memory
Doomed to hang upon the wall
A snapshot of life's symphony
.
But thou art not a memory
To be displayed in grandest hall
Rather a growing sovereign life
To not be guarded jealously
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If thou wert
Is a question of thine state
And tis impossible to quantify
An entity so great
As the person stood before me
With the sun upon their face
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If thou wert a chalice
Though I would sip with utmost care
Soon thou would be empty
Despite your artistry so fair
.
If thou wert a sunrise
Though I would watch with glee
My joy would turn to sorrow
As you arc towards the sea
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And if thou wert the ocean
Though I would with joy explore
Eventually I'd have to leave you
For my life that waits ashore
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I say thou aren't a treasure
A cold and soulless thing
Nor yet art thou a poem
Crafted for a muse to sing
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Rather I say thou art thine self
And to that self you must be true
The one to make a choice for thee
My love, it must be you
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But if you would give consent
And so promise to be mine
I would cherish you and promise
Likewise, to be thine
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Across the span of writing
The symphony of our lives
I would sip of thee with care
And watch you in the morning rise
Please forgive me if I stare
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I would sail till I had seen it all
Side by side with you, my love
And heed at once thine treasured call
To listen as you recite
The poem of your life
.
If thou say yes
And agree to tie your lifetime beside mine
So would I, my love,
Likewise tie my own to thine
And explore this world with you
Till the reaper calls our time
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I've naught to offer save that time
A simple spark upon this Earth
The one thing truly mine
And I offer it to you
In exchange for thine
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Thou art not a chalice
For thou would overflow
The rim's attempt to keep you from
Wherever you would go
.
Thou art not a sunrise
For clouds can never hide
The burning love and joy within
The glowing soul inside
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An ocean cannot encompass
All that thou mean to me
With the sole exception of
A spirit strong and free
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A treasure cannot express
All the value that you hold
With smile bright and quick delight
Worth a million weight in gold
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Thine story is a poem
In evolving, growing verse
Yet never captured on a page
Nor to spoken word coerced
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From now till death, I wish to hear
At the birth of every year
That melodic voice of thine
Whispering that you're mine
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And to that whisper I would say
with the birth of every day
Though you I cannot define
That forever I am thine
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Thou art a wonder first and last
And when our time is long since past
I hope that I have earned the right
At the fading of our light
For our dust to intertwine
Forever to be thine
And to call you in my turn
Forever mine
About the Creator
Alexander McEvoy
Writing has been a hobby of mine for years, so I'm just thrilled to be here! As for me, I love writing, dogs, and travel (only 1 continent left! Australia-.-)
"The man of many series" - Donna Fox
I hope you enjoy my madness
AI is not real art!



Comments (8)
Never again will I believe you when you say you don’t understand how love feels. I will only believe that you have not found it yet.
HOW is this not a top story? What an excellent poem! The rhyming is skillful, the story is beautiful, romantic, melancholic, and absolutely stunning!
Most excellent
This is breathtaking! Let’s be real—if someone wrote this for me, I’d probably ugly cry, frame it, and casually bring it up in every conversation for the rest of my life. Incredibly done! ✨
I don't know why but I found this very lyrical and sang it to my own tune. I had a blast and loved it so much!
Amazing work throughout! Truly epic. Loved “A radiant stanza In the symphony of life” i’m not sure if you put this in the tattoo challenge, but that’s a great line
True stories!!!!!
Such a beautiful ode to love. Gorgeous work Alexander.