Unfinished Soul Business
When connections end but the energy keeps circling back.

We ended clean on paper,
no dramatic scene,
just a polite “take care”
That didn’t mean anything.
﹁﹂
But my body didn’t get the memo.
I still turn when your name
floats out of someone else’s mouth
like a scent carried on a coat.
﹁﹂
I run into you in the wrong places—
the cereal aisle,
the song that starts at 1:07,
the exact shade of green
on a stranger’s scarf.
﹁﹂
I delete the thread
Then check my archived chats
like I’m looking for a missing receipt
to prove I wasn’t imagining us.
﹁﹂
Some nights I dream
We finish the conversation properly,
You finally saying the sentence
That would make the air behave.
But morning arrives messy,
And your absence is still a room
I keep accidentally walking into.
﹁﹂
Maybe this is what unfinished means—
not love, not loss,
just the energy of almost
circling my life
like a quiet satellite
that refuses to burn out.
About the Creator
Milan Milic
Hi, I’m Milan. I write about love, fear, money, and everything in between — wherever inspiration goes. My brain doesn’t stick to one genre.
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Oh, this is so relatable. Thank you for articulating this for so many of us. Beautiful.