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Some words in my head are better unsaid
than voiced for the world to hear
some thoughts churn around but never find sound
and โtis for the better, I fear
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Many words wander in the thoughts that I ponder
but never my lips shall they meet
instead I withdraw behind saturnine walls
to a world of silent retreat
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In corners of my mind where my deepest thoughts grind
are words that are best left unspoken
than pursed through the frown of this gossamer clown
and risk that my heart may be broken
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I serve out my time, a lost lonely mime
adrift in a world of anguish
shackled and quelled by my taciturn jail
with only this unspoken language
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Comments (16)
incredible!
Relatable and brilliantly penned! Congratulations on Top Story!
This stings a bit. Thereโs a reason we sometimes squelch our voices in life! Congrats on Top Story! Richly deserved!
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Great entry, Rob! It's nice to see a story from you! Your rhymes always flow with precision. Hope all is well, my friend!
The imagery stole my breath away. The juxtaposition between our inner and outer voice cuts to the essence of who we are.
Liked very much!
Nice
Very well done! Congrats on Top Story!
Welcome back RM!! It's been a while but I'm happy you arrived with a bang (TS)!! The flow and relatability of this one are soooo spot on!! Well done!!
Very relatable. Love the imagery with in your words . Gave it so much emotion. Congratulations on top story. ๐ฅณ
Very well done. Congratulations on being in the top stories.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ๐๐๐๐๐๐
So wonderful to see your name in my notifications, RM! Sorry I'm a little late to the party, but glad to see Vocal was not! Congrats on Top Story! The mime imagery is such a fitting one for such a challenge entry! Really well done!
Brilliantly penned!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
Heyyy Rob, so happy to see you back! How have you been doing? Loved your poem!
Great poem, though it pulls hard on the heartstrings.