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Waterfall

A poem about my current feelings

By Rene PetersPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Waterfall
Photo by Mike Lewis HeadSmart Media on Unsplash

I don't know how to cope at all.

My eyes are like a waterfall,

all they know to do is bawl.

I wish you could call

before nightfall.

It's nice to recall

the times overall.

Around you, I could be an oddball.

I was myself overall.

You would pick me up whenever I fall.

Without you, I had a downfall.

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This is about my grandma, who I miss dearly. The strongest, most amazing woman, who will never be forgotten. The following story shares what happened to her, along with other major details from my life.

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If you read it all and liked it, subscribing, commenting, and/or hearting it would be appreciated. I write mainly poetry. Thank you for reading.

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About the Creator

Rene Peters

I write what I know, usually in the form of poetry. I tend to lean towards mental health, epilepsy, and loss/grieving.

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  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsden3 years ago

    Such a sweet emotion, missing someone so

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Lovely!!! Left some love!!!💖💖💕

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    This is a lovely piece. Well done.

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    This was so sweet and emotional, and the afterward really gave it that much more meaning ❤️

  • Lamar Wiggins3 years ago

    A melancholy tone for sweet remembrance. I loved it.

  • L.C. Schäfer3 years ago

    A lovely tribute to your grandma

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