When you depart
“Feeling You”
“When you depart”
I like to think of it, as if
our hearts were the sun.
The earth and moon our body and souls,
dancing together.
Seen and unseen,
like our love.
Sometimes dim, but always bright…
"عندما تغادر"
أحب تظن بهِ، كقلبنا كنن الشمس
ان الأرض والقمر كجسمان وروحا راقصة
مرئية وغير مرئية، كحبنا
بعض الأحيان خافتة، ولكن دائما مذهلة
-CWH-
About the Creator
Corey W Harland
Retired soldier, writing as a therapy, hobby, and as a dream career as I go. I hope to fill this page with poetry, photographs, and stories that will inspire all who read to embrace their own beauty and let their own lights shine bright!
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Comments (2)
Seen and unseen like our love. That line was so beautiful. Loved your poem!
Like this. It makes sense and a good thought,✌️