O h! Mighty Heavens. Another Portal to the Mysteries
C aress bumps of a mother with her little ones
E thereal feels of colors never seen— Eyes never witnessed
A lmighty created a universe deep down our land and minds
N arratives— a hidden realm where mysteries breathe, and life
bends to will.
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Author's note;
Although I binge-watch all the time, I always tell myself, "This is the last time!" But let’s be real—nothing ever changes. 😂
This time, though, I decided to binge on something actually worth watching! It’s a Netflix documentary series. I know most of you will comment, “Oh, I’d love to watch it!” but probably won’t. lol!
Anyway, no biggie—I found it so intriguing and genius that I just had to share it with you all!
Series Name: Our Oceans [Only on Netflix]
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Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
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The mysteries are mysteries, and love exists everywhere, in every glance, in every sound. Recently, I've realized that the gaze of a seal heals me—silly?
This is very endearing and heartwarming!
Beautiful!
Wow, this is absolutely captivating! Your words beautifully paint a mysterious and enchanting picture—it's like stepping into a whole new realm through your writing. And the author’s note is so relatable and fun! Outstanding work in sharing your thoughts so creatively!
Your poem is a mesmerising exploration of the unknown, beautifully weaving together imagery of creation, mystery, and life’s deep-seated wonders.
Your poem is so beautiful… I found things like the ocean and sea animals peaceful.
Well, I honestly think I'd love to watch it!😅 Your poem is a beautiful symphony of mystery, nature and fear of God. Well done Sister!💕✨
I loved the creativity, the image, and the poem and your presentation of it (the way you spelled out Ocean, clever). Goof job Maryam. The documentary is also really good. I must watch it again - I love anything to do with the ocean, in case you haven't noticed.
I'm not a documentary kinda person so I'll pass on this. But thelat image reminded me of the movie "A Ring of Endless Light". Loved your Acrostic so much!
Ohh! You have written about this documentary in a very profound and creative way. It seems amazing after reading your description. No problem, this is not the last time also 😃😃 Very well done, the poem is great!✨🤞👊
Excellent
Great Poem! Sounds like an interesting watch!
Very nice! 🐬
Your poetic intro is so captivating—it feels like a portal in itself! Now I’m curious, what’s the name of the documentary?
What a vibrant, imaginative piece—where life truly meets colors!✨ Also, that author’s note? Pure relatable gold!😆 Binge-watching always wins—glad this time it was something inspiring. Now you’ve got me curious about the documentary... might just add it to my “to-watch-but-maybe-later” list!😉💖
😂 Author's note is actually funny, Sis. Poem is an ode to Oceans which are another mystery of this world ✨