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Where pain falls

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By Rachel SteinmetzPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Where pain falls
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Where pain falls after felt,

Hollow, sagged and small.

When all chill is made to melt,

And no heart remains at all.

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Where streams of rage already dense,

And snowflakes bite the warmth they give.

When tranquil gold turns thick and tense,

And life itself forgets to live.

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Where hope and past are one and same,

Stampeded echoes of peace, a gift.

Strangers seeking a useful name,

Within a soul no joy can lift.

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Now tears have shamed in their own faith,

And not a wisp of childhood would stay.

Light how feared now more than safe,

Now all of man must run away.

sad poetryStream of Consciousness

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Rachel Steinmetz

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  • T. Lichtabout a year ago

    And life itself forgets to live.- what a line! great poem!

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    Gosh I love that line - and snowflakes bite the warmth they give. This was so good.

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