the silence of snow,
gently falling from above,
whispering, quiet.
There’s nothing more gentle, more quiet, or more tranquil than a soft falling snowy day. Hope some peace and calm traveled to some hearts with this poem!
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Moe Radosevich
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Comments (2)
That "whispering quiet" line really brings a delicate impact to this. Great job!
You captured this so perfectly!! I had plans to do a snow one too as I find snow fall to be the most peaceful, lovely thing. I love the silence. Excellent work!!