The world spins around,
A vast sphere of life and light,
Nature's endless dance.
About the Creator
Jio jeba
I am a writer born brighter.😁💝
Hey everyone, I think you like my poems and lines, but I want to tell you the truth: I am using some AI to make every line of my poetry perfect.
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Compelling and original writing
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Our Song
Evening has given way to night. Gently, I settle next to you on the comfortable, old love seat and reach for your hand. You snatch it away, again. It cuts me to the quick, but I hide the pain, understanding that the reaction is but part of your demented state. Since the accident, your presence here in our cozy home has been clouded by a haze I can't see. Nevertheless, I feel the frigidity of your expressions and it serves as an excruciating reminder of the immeasurable distance between us.
By Dana Crandell4 days ago in Fiction
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this haiku is a beautiful celebration of the natural world