You+Me=Us
I am attracting both a passionate lover and tender best friend in one amazing person ❤️-
You call
I come…
I cry, and
You are the
Best fan...
You Wipe my eyes, and
Talk to my soul, only you
Can go over my mind
With your love
This poem is my Entry to the Short and Sweet Challenge organized by Vocal in July 2023.
Theme: "Write a love poem using only words with four letters or less."
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Rachel Reviews: Lunch Tales: Teagan by Lucille Guarino
Well, I did enjoy this! Sometimes, all you need is just great storytelling and this is what Lucille Guarino delivers here. There's no big message to this book; it's just about folks and families, living their lives and coping with everything that's being thrown at them and finding their way. But when it's done well, like it is here, then you have characters to whom you can relate, tension which leaves you rooting for a better outcome, attraction which has your heart racing and an urge, as a reader, to see the characters happy with the people with whom they belong.
By Rachel Deeming4 days ago in BookClub
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So sweet!
very moving. well done
A sweet tribute to a VIP 💗
This was extremely sweet and heartwarming! I loved it!
Beautiful work! Very heartfelt!
Very touching
Lovely, nice work.
Simple yet effective. Well done :)
Lovely & evocative of an intimate gesture of loving kindness.
lovely..
Beautiful. Love it.
Fabulous and loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
very heart-touching. Thanks for sharing.
❤️❤️
You nailed it, definitely short and sweet 🥰
Very nice!
Very beautiful 💕