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Zenith, Broken

thoughts on a barefoot bush walk

By Savannah K. WilsonPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Photo taken by me  -  Winmalee, NSW, Australia (2015)

Great and mighty boulder of hard stone

Who formed your size and power?

By what hand and for what purpose?

Have you been here since the beginning?

Yet, still in your greatness you have broken

What chance then do I have to remain whole?

If one as you has been cracked and split by the world

Compared to your countless years standing 

My days are mere grains of sand falling

How did you break? What force did this to you?

What would that same force do to me?

For next to you I am tiny, small … nothing 

Yet I am still standing, damaged but whole

Truly even the timeless greatness of stone

Is not beyond breaking and cracking from life

But I remain here … somehow not broken

For there is no rock like our solid rock 

No rock like our God

Poem Inspired by this rock & 2 Samuel 22:2

nature poetryOdeStream of ConsciousnessFree Verse

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Savannah K. Wilson

She/Her | Australian 🏳️‍⚧️ Author

Queer and all class with a touch of sass! (or maybe the reverse!)

short stories, poetry, life experience

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    This was extremely profound and very powerful! Loved your poem so much!

  • Caroline Craven2 years ago

    Somehow not broken! This was so good.

  • angela hepworth2 years ago

    Very powerful! Loved the symbolism.

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