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‘My Name Is Yara Sulimayah’ -The Kingdom Over The Sea
‘She let out a breath she didn’t realise she was holding.’ A sentence I have read numerous times throughout my reading life and one that I have a secret love for. I often play ‘Where’s Wally’ with this quote, squealing when I come across it in a book.
By Sarah O'Grady3 years ago in Critique
Baltic States put migrants to use and then eject them
It turned out that migrants are no longer welcome in the Baltic States. In 2002, the Ministers of the Council of Europe member states undertook to develop and implement integration policies founded on the principles of human rights, democracy and the rule of law. Being the Council of Europe member states the Baltic countries welcomed thousands of migrants and enthusiastically supported them.
By Adomas Abromaitis3 years ago in Critique
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Chapter 1 The Plane Ride Home The girl in the middle seat of the international flight had only turned seventeen four months ago. She was returning home from a study abroad in Tokyo, Japan and was feeling increasingly uncomfortable along with a host of other emotions from happiness to sorrow to extreme exhaustion. The one that was forcing itself to the forefront of her mind was the uncomfortable feeling. She was in the middle seat, stuck between two grown men, neither of whom appeared to speak good English, both of which were drinking heavily.
By Vikki Head3 years ago in Critique
The Midnight Society
When I was just thirteen years old, I had the idea for this story. It was full of corruption, espionage, world politics, and maybe just slightly too ambitious for a kid. But I loved writing it. The research for how political power works, types of governments and their function, cold wars and espionage was endlessly fascinating. Crafting plot twist after plot twist, betrayal after betrayal, characters so real I could almost see them sitting before me was what gave me my kick start into writing. It got complicated, and twisted, and I was horrible at keeping up with notes, so I lost the trail of the plot and the enthusiasm to continue it.
By Sarah Massey3 years ago in Critique
A YA Story Looking for Input
*** This is basically an excerpt from a YA/Upper Middle grade story looking for critique.*** My main questions would be - from the perspective of a reader of this genre - does the story grab your attention? What needs to be added to make it more interesting? And, of course, if you notice any grammatical errors or clumsy sentences, feel free to point them out also. Add any critiques to the comment section, or PM if you would like it to be kept more quiet.
By KJ Aartila3 years ago in Critique
Sun & Sand. Top Story - August 2023.
Evan Forrester stalked up the beach and to the beachside bar at least six steps ahead of Katie. This left plenty of room for people to not believe that they were a pair and those people innocently cut in between the two people as groups either made their ways back to the beach or up to the bar as well. A few of them were kind enough to mumble “excuse me” or “pardon me.” No one hung back and allowed her to catch back up with Evan; no one knew about the infractions that they were committing. No; it was the young group of college aged males who knowingly and indiscreetly stared at her to size her up that really bothered the brunette beauty. Had it been in her nature, she might have flipped them off. Today, she was dangerously close to that being in her nature.
By Kent Brindley3 years ago in Critique
Broken Dreams and Stolen Hopes:
In the heart of Africa's vibrant land, where hope once bloomed like wildflowers in the sun-kissed meadows, a shadow looms over the very essence of democracy. The year 2023 etched its name in the annals of Nigerian history, not as a celebration of the people's voice, but as a mournful symphony of rigged hopes and stolen dreams.
By Rocke Freeman3 years ago in Critique
Breaking Down the VA Rating Schedule: Key Insights for Veterans
Breaking Down the VA Rating Schedule: Key Insights for Veterans Navigating the VA Rating Schedule can feel like walking through a maze. It's packed with percentages and provisions that seem to change at every turn. But don't worry, this guide breaks down the rating schedule into easy-to-understand pieces. We'll explain how the system works and offer key insights for veterans. By the end of this guide, you'll approach the VA Rating Schedule with confidence and better understand how it impacts your benefits.
By Jason Baril3 years ago in Critique
