Character Development
The Wavering Point!. Honorable Mention in Self-Editing Epiphany Challenge.
Original Excerpt The apartment pulsed like a living thing; radiator clicks a heartbeat, pipes creaking like arteries. Morgan hadn’t thought about this before today — today, before the letter came. Now everything felt intensified, everything felt conscious.
By Neli Ivanova11 months ago in Critique
what does censure mean
In a world where opinions and actions are constantly scrutinized, the concept of censure plays a crucial role in holding individuals and institutions accountable. But what exactly does it mean to be censured? Why do we need such a term, and how does it function in our societies? For many, censure is a distant legal or political term, but its impact on our lives, whether through public figures or personal relationships, is far-reaching.
By Md. Iqbal Hasan11 months ago in Critique
To Change or Not to Change
Change is terrifying. But some days, it's the only way to survive. Philosophers have spent centuries searching for the meaning of life. In reality, we all do. In the stillness of the night, after darkness has fallen and everyone has gone to sleep, we all dive deep into our thoughts.
By CrimsonQueen11 months ago in Critique
Arcane: How Riot’s Animated Masterpiece Redefined Video Game Adaptations
Video game adaptations have long struggled to capture the depth and complexity of their source material. Arcane, the critically acclaimed animated series from Riot Games and Fortiche Productions, not only overcame this challenge but redefined what a video game adaptation can achieve.
By Bounty Hunter 11 months ago in Critique
Self-Editing Epiphany. Top Story - March 2025.
People Pleaser: A blessing or a curse? I am the youngest of six, to a mother that struggled her whole life with Bi-polar disorder, before there was positive treatment. She was the daughter of an English teacher and the oldest granddaughter to a preacher. Because of this, she struggled to let the mask fall and get the help she needed.
By Kelli Sheckler-Amsden11 months ago in Critique
A More Perfect Person
With racing thoughts and the usage of psychoactive drugs, I actually thought I could compose a proper essay. In my writing, it was not like holding liquid water but ice, burning in my palms. When I penned “Ayn Rand: The Unknown Ideal Woman” (That Challenge entry can be found below. I still think it is my best effort in nonfiction) I knew I’d be lauded as the top writer and claim gold.
By Skyler Saunders11 months ago in Critique
The Legend of Vox Machina: From Critical Role to Animated Glory
The rise of The Legend of Vox Machina from a tabletop RPG campaign to a full-fledged animated series is a testament to the power of dedicated fandom and high-quality storytelling. As an adaptation of Critical Role, the show brings the beloved characters of the original campaign to life with stunning animation, strong performances, and a narrative that blends humor, action, and emotional depth. But how well does it translate the essence of the original game, and what impact has it had on both the animation and RPG landscapes?
By Bounty Hunter 11 months ago in Critique
Ready Player One: From Page to Screen – A Tale of Nostalgia and Adaptation
Few stories embody the essence of pop culture nostalgia as effectively as Ready Player One. Ernest Cline’s novel, published in 2011, became an instant hit among gamers and geeks, offering a treasure trove of 1980s references wrapped in a fast-paced virtual adventure. The 2018 film adaptation, directed by Steven Spielberg, promised to bring this digital odyssey to life on the big screen. However, as with many adaptations, significant changes were made—some enhancing the story, others altering its core themes. This review will explore the key differences between the novel and the film, evaluating how each medium delivers its vision.
By Bounty Hunter 12 months ago in Critique
Why Some Adaptations of Books Fail (And a Few That Get It Right)
Translating a beloved book into a successful movie is no easy feat. Fans expect to see their favorite characters and storylines faithfully recreated, while filmmakers must balance runtime constraints, cinematic storytelling, and studio demands. Some adaptations become instant classics, while others fail spectacularly, alienating audiences and disappointing readers. But what separates a great adaptation from a disaster? Let’s break down where things go wrong—and highlight a few adaptations that actually got it right.
By Bounty Hunter 12 months ago in Critique
The Failure of RPG Adaptations in Cinema: Why Hollywood Doesn’t Understand Role-Playing Games
For decades, Hollywood has attempted to adapt role-playing games (RPGs) into movies, often with disastrous results. Whether it’s the infamous Dungeons & Dragons (2000) or other lesser-known attempts, RPG films frequently fail to capture the essence of the games they are based on. But why does this happen? Why do movies inspired by RPGs rarely succeed critically or commercially? This article explores the key reasons behind this ongoing failure and examines what Hollywood could learn to improve future adaptations.
By Bounty Hunter 12 months ago in Critique
