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Rajasthan Election Results 2023: BJP Emerges Victorious with 109 Seats; Ashok Gehlot Tenders Resignation - LIVE Updates. Content Warning.
In a riveting turn of events, the Rajasthan Election Results 2023 have unfolded with unprecedented drama and anticipation. The BJP has secured a commanding victory, winning 109 seats and leading in six others. The political landscape of the state is undergoing a seismic shift as Ashok Gehlot, the incumbent Chief Minister, tenders his resignation. This blog post aims to provide a comprehensive overview of the unfolding events, offering real-time updates on the Rajasthan Election Results 2023.
By Debjit Das2 years ago in Critique
Mad Woman
The seat was cold and hard; the wood was worn where others before me had taken the stand. The weight of the eyes on me was suffocating, all these people here and I didn’t know a single one, but they all knew me.
By Kelsey Winds2 years ago in Critique
Untitled Rough Drafter I'm Calling it "Part 2 Draft"
Some would say I made my bed it’s time I lie in it. Some would say, what I did I had every tragic thing done to me coming. This is in the mind of a survivor, I could hear the crashing waves as my eyes flutter open. I look over as I feel his warm body holding me I knew this felt right I just didn’t want to admit it. He isn’t married but you slept with your best friend’s boyfriend. I try to rationalise this, but it is impossible. I look into his eyes holding his cheek pondering how can something that should be wrong feel so right.
By Emily Curry (Rising Phoenix)2 years ago in Critique
My Coworker, Death. Top Story - November 2023.
Death and I work very closely, but never together I see death in passing about once a week, but we've never actually met. For most people death is an obscure thought, something that rarely crosses the mind. For others, it is the prominent shadow that runs past our peripherals. Tonight, death worked over time. He was not a blur that ran past as I was turning away, but was a prominent shadow in the room I stood in and the floor beneath me. I didn't see him at first, he's easy to miss if you want to. My focus was on the muddy veins of my patient's right arm, attempting to finagle one last good one to draw from. It was never my forte, but when I did get it, I enjoyed watching the smooth red liquid collect into the tubes; the simple movement of it was relaxing to me in a sense. It was a reward, an earning for my blind pokes that eventually caught what I was looking for.
By Kelsey Winds2 years ago in Critique
the gifts
Gifts from my parents, like my first heavy bag and wraps, often came as solutions to what was given to me in far more precious and formative years. They bought stuff to solve the problems that came with these early, less material gifts. I remember most fondly the Everlast blend of poly-foam in leather that hung from the basement of my childhood home. It was a later offering to temper The Rage–one of Mother’s first gifts to me.
By kp2 years ago in Critique
Feral: An Awakening
Content Warning: Child peril. I wrote this story last year for the Paolini Fantasy Challenge. Very few read it, but one who did (Roy Stevens) suggested expanding it into a novel.
By Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock2 years ago in Critique
Harvestman?
A few months ago, I participated in the 'Dancing with Distraction' acrostic poem challenge here on Vocal. One of my submissions, "The Snapper and My Confidence," actually got Top Story, which was so very cool! Moreover, it received a lot of very kind comments.
By Hannah E. Aaron2 years ago in Critique
Snyta
You dumped the contents of the paper coffee cup out the window of your shiny black Tesla onto a road that had seen much the same—butts and candy wrappers—
By Pluto Wolnosci2 years ago in Critique
Fantastic Mr. Fox (2009) -- A Critique
Fantastic Mr. Fox (2009) is a stop motion animation movie based on the book of the same name by Ronald Dahl, who also wrote Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. The plot revolves around Mr. Fox, an ex heist master who lets his confidence reign free above all else. Because of his ego, Mr. Fox (voiced by George Clooney) makes a mistake on a heist with his wife, Felicity Fox, and they become trapped in a cage. As they face certain death, Mrs. Fox reveals she's pregnant and tells her husband that if they survive, Mr. Fox needs to promise he will never try to steal ever again. Mr. Fox agrees and they dig their way to safety.
By J "Griffin" Rooms2 years ago in Critique
Water Only diet
Have you ever heard of something called water fasting? Well, it’s a type of fast that restricts everything except, well, water. Most people only water fast for 72 hours at most, but what if you did this for the rest of your life? You’d be fine, right?
By ALICE WAMBETI2 years ago in Critique
Death..
death.. What is your idea of death? In fact, I don't care about your idea of death, and I don't care about mine either.
By Doaa seif2 years ago in Critique
How to Critique a Blog Post
A blog critique is a written evaluation of a blog post. It can be used to improve the writing, content, or design of the blog post. When critiquing a blog post, it is important to be constructive and specific. The goal is to help the author improve their blog post, not to tear it down.
By Timothy A Rowland2 years ago in Critique