Family is
caring and loving persons
always together.
(Another haiku for analysis and I think I am improving even just a little bit. I know that I need work. Does anybody know a good book on how to write these poems better. Let me know if possible. Thank you.)
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Mark Graham
I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.
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A Bedroom
A place to bring a sense of solitude and peace a place to rest. (I think I am doing a little better on the writing of haiku, but I know I need practice. So, when I write more haikus please read and share your thoughts on them if you wouldn't mind. Thank you in advance.)
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
THE STORY CONTINUES Tony Yayo Speaks On Altercation With Ja Rule On Flight! "He's Lucky 50 Cent Wasn't There"
If anyone should be awarded the Presidential Medal of Freedom, it would go to Marvin Bernard bka Tony Yayo. This man has held down 50 Cent and crew for decades. He’s the Memphis Bleek to Jay-Z. Or maybe he’s like Ty Ty. Either way, he cleared up a minor altercation on a Delta flight in first class. He and Uncle Murda sat right next to Ja Rule. The latter asked the former “Yo, we good?” to which Yayo and company responded incredulously. Without a melee, Ja Rule gets to his feet and starts barking. Meanwhile, Uncle Murda is recording all of this on video.
By Skyler Saunders2 days ago in Critique
Part 2 Interview With Joe Patterson, Author Of Melanin Memoirs
This is my second interview with Joe Patterson. His 4th anniversary writing on Vocal will be in March 2026. He has one achievement on Vocal, The Other Foot. He has over 17,000 reads on Vocal since he started on Vocal in 2022. Joe Patterson is very creative poet and rapper. Joe is deep thinker and I feel it is reflected in his latest published book, Melanin Memoirs.
By Mariann Carrollabout 11 hours ago in Interview
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Superb!!
Well done.
Feedback requested: I was told 5, 7, 5 syllables. Could add my, our, most - are My friend with a masters in poetry said, once we get the format we can change anything. She was letting me know she could change anything but I needed to get the format first.😉😊💕 Nice work Mark!❤️🥰