The Kiss
Painting mundanity in an extraordinary light.
Shimmering strokes of gold falls downward into a patch of colorful wildflowers. Evoking the essence of admiration and joy, the mundanity of a kiss is brought into an extraordinary light. These complex figures are intertwined in an act of love. Sitting besides a steep cliff. But is their love reciprocal?
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Comments (10)
What an interesting take on a painting I've seen so often I typically take for granted. I have to admit, I've never noticed just how precariously she kneels next to that steep cliff. Profound.
Great critique. I always think this picture makes them seem like they are in a cocoon and that despite the beauty of the gold and the colours, she doesn't look quite comfortable. Bloody lovely to look at though.
Indeed! Solid, deep questions. I am now wondering the same. That cliff is a very curious inclusion into the piece, isn't it. Fantastic choice, and a great critique. Congratulations!
Nice work. Glad some painting critiques gained recognition! 😊👏
A reminder that art is meant to make you think. Well done, and congrats!
Oooh love ending the question. Packs a real punch. Congrats, KB!
Beautiful allusion. Said everything you needed to in 50 words. Congratulations on your win.
Always liked this one! Congrats!
Your review is much more beautiful than the art!
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