Am I Free To Go Now?
A Poem
Am I free to go now?
Am I free from the spell
Of this Odyssean hell
Trapped in someone’s paradise
They say,
“Oh, but it’s so nice”
To them perhaps
But I’m tired of feeling hopelessly homeless
Tired of munching on lotus
I did not need to stay
For what I witnessed today
I saw it coming
Near yet far away
No need to go out of my way
No need to make them pay
They do their best
To put me to the test
But I just move out of the way
And let the universe
Chaos
Work its magic
Another fantastically tragic tale
Of someone going out of their way
To make my day
Not knowing that I do not care
Because I know it is coming
I can hear the humming
Of my shadow’s drumming
The time has past
So, alas
I ask again
Am I free to go now?
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Comments (4)
I like the choice of words and rhyme scheme. Check out mine. A romantic poem. https://todaysurvey.today/poets/golden-moments-mo2sb0bxk%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
Great poem! I too am tired of being hopelessly homeless, stuck wandering until i could find a place to call home.
Excellent poetry. Good job Eric!!!
Yes.