Distracted by Juliet again...
Dancing Distractions Challenge Entry❤️🔥
Dancing dutiful with my love for her
Inseparable from my mind...
She wrapped up my desires, and
Traded them for her devotion.
Reality only settles a diminutive portion of,
Answers that were never spoken so, I
Carry the torture.
Trapped
Inside
Of
Nothing!
*************A Note from the Poet********
I'm in the Middle of My Juliet Series But I Would love to participate in the Challenges so here is something New and Fresh to keep things Proceeding ❗
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (17)
That worked just great, both in the "Juliet" series and the challenge. Well done, Lonzo! 💖
Wonderful work, as always, Lonzo! Your poems speak to the true romantic in me 🤗❤️
Beautiful work lil bro! 😊
How do you even do this? Telling an entire story in just few poetic lines? This is so beautiful!
As wonderful as usual! Loved it so much!
Beautiful poem
I have some grate lines in this poem 😊🥰
"She wrapped up my desires, and Traded them for her devotion." Oh, I feel this--the story of my life told in but two lines, eleven words.
The way you use the words you use, creating such a feel and imagery. This one was extremely well done!
Very nice flow!
Love the flow of it. Such a heartfelt poem.
Trapped inside of nothing … I can so relate. Your way with words is wonderful, Lonzo 💕🙂
Clever and it perfectly flowed!!@ Loved it!!💖💖💕
Really like these Lonzo
Woah!!! That was good!
I really liked the rhythm of it. Pulled my heart strings.
Amazing!! “Trapped inside of nothing!” This poem is so heartfelt and sad but sooo good!! Yessss 💛👏🏼