Fevered π‘οΈπ΅βπ«
Fawning π« π·
Delulu π€ͺπ
Wavering πβοΈ
Jaded ππͺ«
Disenchanted ππ₯
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When Iβm not lost in my own plots, Iβm either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging lifeΒ withΒ aΒ grin.
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The Devil's Triangle
The sails ruffled in the breeze as we cruised along. The Sea Breeze was a mid-size catamaran that sailed out of Royal Naval Dockyard in Bermuda. We had booked this trip weeks in advance and were now looking at our Captain, Spike and two boat hands. Paddy and Wilson seemed like nice guys, joking around with the passengers and telling us some stories about Bermuda that only locals would know. Their island accents sounded almost British but they were pleasant to listen to.
By Barbara Gode Wiles6 days ago in Fiction
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Accurate
Loved it despite the sad undertone. π
This captures that 'delulu' to 'disenchanted' arc perfectly. There's something so lonely but beautiful about the visual of sitting on that curved road while processing all these stage
man the stages of light leaving eyes-thought provoking and I feel we have all been there
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Wow, I don't know whether to laugh or cry- it's funny and sad at the same time.π I'm pretty sure I'm Delulu ππ€ͺπ
Wow what a poignant progression of human nature.