Fragments of a Walk
In Thought Between the Store and Home

The bag had torn. I hadn’t checked
and now the seam gave way
not fast enough to drop it all
not strong enough to stay
A child scraped chalk across the bricks
then wiped it with his shirt
he watched the white return to red
and scuffed along the dirt
A window kept a bare chair
no cushion, only frame
the shape of someone left behind
whose silence held a name
My shoe picked up a foil square
or something thin and gray
it curled with me. It wouldn’t leave.
I brought it anyway
A dog behind a wire rail
stood still beside a dish
no sound, no blink, no wag or plea
as if he had one wish
The man outside the grocer’s door
held something in his lap
a cup or horn, I couldn’t tell
he didn’t lift the flap
I didn’t stop or speak or nod
the bag had grown too thin
I crossed the street without a thought
and let the rest begin
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Beautiful and Brutal Things, his latest book.

Comments (2)
Loved it! I felt like I was walking there myself.
Fabulous writing Tim! You capture emotions very well!