A new dawn arrives,
with French kisses from the sky.
The peeping moon smiles.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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The sails ruffled in the breeze as we cruised along. The Sea Breeze was a mid-size catamaran that sailed out of Royal Naval Dockyard in Bermuda. We had booked this trip weeks in advance and were now looking at our Captain, Spike and two boat hands. Paddy and Wilson seemed like nice guys, joking around with the passengers and telling us some stories about Bermuda that only locals would know. Their island accents sounded almost British but they were pleasant to listen to.
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Gorgeous Cathy! This is a winner!
Sweet, lovely poem.
Très joli poème ! Vivement le prochain lever du soleil.
"French kisses from the sky" - love that!
The love the personification of the night sky Cathy!! So beautifully done!!
How playful and lovely! Love the peeping moon!
French kisses from the sky is very clever, Cathy! Loved the poem and the pic!
cant a day without reading your story, on pointπ
That's so beautiful!β¨ Loved it! Cathy
So good
Awww, this was so sweet! Loved your Haiku!
Oh, gorgeous! Love those french kisses π
β€οΈ oh. This is so cute and clever! Lovely stuff.
I love this piece.
Peeping moon - what a fantastic description. I love this one.
That's such a good way of putting it ~french kiss from the sky~ very playful, I love that you made me Imagine the moon with eyes and mouth here. It's such a lovely thought, puts me in a good mood. Beautifully done.
That dawn sounds pretty saucy!!!
French kisses form the sky...that is a visual in itself
Iβve never heard French kiss used with such innocence and nostalgia! Well done
That's a very intimate relationship with the sky. Excellent work
Aw, this put a big smile on my face. I love winter and can't wait for it so this was just perfect! :)
I really like this. tbh, most of these I have seen have not made me smile like this one did. Many are for Gaza and make me sad, and some others just don't do it for me. This made me smile, and hopeful in a way.. if that makes sense. π
Oh my gosh, this is DARLING, Cathy! In love with this piece!!!!!